It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is thought that
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should take
risks
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sometimes either in their working
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or their personal
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.
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taking
risks
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from time to time is crucial for growth person’s opportunities, I believe that the drawbacks outweigh the benefits because in certain situations it might have negative consequences on
people
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’s
lives
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. The main reason why
people
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are taking
risks
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is to have new chances in their
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. Having said that some
risks
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push
people
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from their comfort zones which helps them to develop new skills and gain confidence through the new experiences they decide to take.
For example
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, Ahamd Alshugary who is one of the most famous influencers in the Middle East, was a mathematics teacher and he used to feel that his job was not suitable for him so he took a risk to leave his job and became an influencer, he is now very successful person in his work.
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, not all
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lead to success and some of them cause failure that results in financial and relationship loss, from my point of view
people
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should be very careful about their choices and avoid taking
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as much as possible. The disadvantage of taking
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is that might have negative consequences on
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’s
lives
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.
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is because some
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do not think very carefully about their decisions and they are not fully experienced.
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poor planning
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can lead to long-term problems and negative effects on that person.
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, some
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leave their jobs
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they win on lottery in the end they not only lose their money but
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their jobs because of their lack of planning. From my perspective, taking
risks
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has more downsides, especially for those who do not have skills in risk management. In conclusion,
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it might be extremely beneficial for
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to take
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in some situations, particularly for personal improvement and skills development, It is essential to be aware of consequences and have planning strategies before taking action to avoid long-term issues.
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this
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reason, it is thought that the cons out way the pros.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Opportunities
  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
  • Mitigate
  • Reap the rewards
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