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The bar chart gives information about southland's main exports in 2000, 20.., and future projection for 2025. Summarize main features and make comparison where relavent.

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bar graph illustrates information about the three main exports of Scotland which are international
tourism
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,
dairy
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products
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 and
meat
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products
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 in the
year
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 2000, 20.. and predictions for the future 2025.
Overall
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, international
tourism
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 will be the highest exported
products
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 in 2025
while
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 the
export
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 of
dairy
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products
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 is the highest for 20.. .
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, the
export
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 of
meat
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products
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 is significantly lower than international
tourism
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 and
dairy
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products
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. In 2025, international
tourism
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 will be the highest exported
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products
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, and just below 10
billion
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 will be exported in that year.
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, in 20.., around 9
billion
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 international
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tourism
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 were exported.
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,
dairy
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products
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 reached approximately 10
billion
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 in 20..,
while
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 in 2000, the
export
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 of
dairy
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products
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were
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 significantly lower than international
tourism
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, which was only around 7
billion
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. In terms of
meat
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products
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, only 6
billion
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meat
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products
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 were exported in 2000.
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, in 20.., the
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export
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exports
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 of
meat
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 were only 5.5
billion
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.
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, in 2025, it will
declined
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 to 5
billion
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, moreover, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourism, dairy, products, meat, export, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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