The table shows the distance covered in various modes of transport

The table shows the distance covered in various modes of transport
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The table compares the distance covered by various modes of transport in 1985 and 2000.
Overall
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it is clear that
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in 2000 the community travelled more than in 1985 in all modes of transport. As the table shows, the crowd walked more in 1985 than in 2000, 255 and 237, respectively. In 1985 folk prefer to travel by bicycle more than in 2000, 51 and 41. In 2000 population moved by car by 2806km,
whereas
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in 1985 bodies traveled by car by 3.199km. Local buses were used more in 1985 than in 2000, 429km and 274km, respectively. In 1985 bodies travelled by long-distance bus less than in 2000, 54km and 124km. In 2000 bodies preferred to travel by bus more than in 1985, 289km and 366km. Taxis were used more in 2000 than in 1985, at 13km and 42km, respectively. Other vehicles in 2000 used 585km,
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in 1985 was used for 450km. All modes were used in 2000 more than in 1985, 4740km and 6475km, respectively.

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