The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate the changes in social media platform preferences of global internet users in 2011-2013. There are five applications that are compared in the given figure, namely, Facebook, Twitter, LinkedIn, Google+, and Pinterest.

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, throughout the three years, Facebook remained the most popular social media channel compared to other applications.

However

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, despite maintaining the number one position, it has experienced a decrease in share of approximately 10.5% per year.

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although

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Twitter's position has been stagnant, Twitter has gained significant favouritism shares, for about 4%, across the given period.

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trend can

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be seen on LinkedIn, as it successfully obtained 2.5% of popular shares per year,

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keeping the same position of the third most popular channel as three years ago.

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, the other two platforms

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experienced an increase in the shares

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retaining its ranking, with Google+, as the channel with the most substantial increase compared to the rest, acquiring a total popularity share of 9%.

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, Pinterest is the social media

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exposed to the least dramatic growth, growing

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only 3% across the three-year period.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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4 paragraphs

185 words

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The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. ​​

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