The chart below shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the number of applicants from four different countries to the universities between 2004 and 2008. At first sight, we can divide the four nations into two groups: the first group contains China and the USA with the largest number of applicants,
while
the second group involves Japan and Russia with the lowest volume of aspirants.
Firstly
, the comparison of the first band. China decreased in the volume of aspirants between 2004 and 2008, with 26000 individuals in 2004 and 15000 in 2008. Although
, the USA increased the number of candidates from 2004 to 2008, with 14000 individuals in 2004 and 26000 individuals in 2008.
Secondly
, more details of the second band. It can be seen that Japan remained stable during the time of the study, while
Russia is the country with the lowest supply of candidates, reaching a lowdown in 2006 with 1000 people.
To sum up
, the diagram shows the percentage of claimants to the universities of one European country.Submitted by mariajoser3 on
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