You have been invited to a networking conference for your field of work. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: ·       Describe the invitation you received and why it is important to you ·       Explain why the conference would be beneficial for you and the company ·       Ask for the company for time off to attend and to cover some of the travel costs Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr. Powell,

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Dear Mr. Powell, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
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letter to express my interest in a networking conference that I have been invited to. I wanted to explain briefly why my participation can be valuable not only for me
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but for the company as well.
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, many representatives from our sector have been invited and it is a great chance to meet them and discuss future collaboration opportunities.
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, some of the tech companies will be present there and since we are planning to change our CRM
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, It can be a beneficial event to know our options,
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pros and cons. I
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permission
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this
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travel expenses to be covered by the company. Looking forward to hearing your feedback on
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matter. Best Regards, Laman.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • networking conference
  • industry leaders
  • cutting-edge
  • professional development
  • strategic partnerships
  • innovative solutions
  • knowledge exchange
  • corporate representation
  • insights
  • synergy
  • sponsorship
  • professional growth
  • seminar
  • workshop
  • personal enrichment
  • corporate benefits
  • organizational growth
  • industry trends
  • collaborative opportunities
  • business acumen
  • time off
  • travel expenses
  • expense coverage
  • enlightening experience
  • mentorship opportunities
  • actionable strategies
  • conference agenda
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