Some people think it is a better way to leave their home country to improve their work and living opportunities, while others think staying in their own country is a better choice.  Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Half of the society
believe
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that moving to a new
country
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could lead to having a better
life
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,
whereas
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the other half rather stay in their native
place
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.
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argument depends on which area they are moving to because if is not as developed as the zone they came from the disadvantages could exceed the advantages. From my own perspective, living abroad can improve your social skills and your
life
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in general if is the right
place
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.  On the one hand,
taking
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making
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the decision
of
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emigrate is hard as you may leave all you know to go to a new
place
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where probably do not have anyone to rely on;
moreover
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, language can
also
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be a great barrier to face.
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, students who finish their degree at college and want to start working are looking for the best
employments
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employment
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they
could
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can
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find and earn as
money
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much money
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as they can so moving from Spain to Canada,
eventhought
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even though
even thought
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that
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than
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the
first,
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could be a great option;
nevertheless
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, there are some aspects, like weather and
life
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quality, that cannot be provided by
this
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country
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. Canada could have better incomes and opportunities but the reality is that a lot of papers have to be done in order to be able to move in. In my opinion, the job offer should be extremely tentative to do it.
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, remaining in your home
country
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could be the easiest option, as having contacts could lead to work opportunities that may satisfy the expectations,
however
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, the salary may not be as
higher
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high
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as in other places.
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, nowadays in
Spain
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Spain,
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the minimum wage is not enough to be able to live a luxurious
life
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, notwithstanding the majority of the
spaniards
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Spaniards
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decide to stay in their
county
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country
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because the Spanish lifestyle cannot be found anywhere else. The way I see it, is that not moving abroad can
also
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have many advantages as having family closer and being able to enjoy the
country
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you have been raised in. To summarize, starting a new
life
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in a
place
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is challenging but in some cases could be worth it, oppositely, deciding not to could be a great option. From my point of view, there is no
place
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like home.
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  • quality of life
  • stronger economies
  • employment opportunities
  • advancement opportunities
  • emotional bonds
  • cultural ties
  • familiar environment
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  • cultural identity
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