WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. The evolution of the horse, with particular emphasis on the changing foot structure. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1
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The diagram illustrates the
horse
evolution throughout 40 Change noun form
horse's
million
years
, underscoring its foot structure. Overall
, it can be seen that scientists have outlined four main stages of Correct article usage
apply
the
animal development.
Correct article usage
apply
To begin
, the horse’s story started 40 million
years
ago, when the ancient animal had fully developed fingers
. Furthermore
, the horse’s ancestor was almost two times smaller than its modern descendants. The subsequent stage shows how these 4 fingers
transformed into the 3 ones 30 million
years
ago. Additionally
, even though the phalanges shortened, the size of the animal increased by approximately 50%.
On the next stage of the horse
evolution 15 Change noun form
horse's
million
years
ago, it became more recognizable by people, but its foot structure still contained the same number of fingers
, although
they gained strength and mobility by additional phalanges. Finally
, modern horses have no fingers
on their feet, but instead
hooves for convenient movement.
In conclusion, I find it interesting that throughout the horse evolution, the animal possessed mostly various amounts of fingers
with phalanges rather than hooves. Besides
, the main factor of
the horse’s foot development was the rise in its size, as with more weight the animal needed more reliable feet.Change preposition
in
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, years, fingers with synonyms.
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