Write a letter to express sympathy for comforting a friend during difficult time

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Dear John, I hope
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letter finds you feeling a little better. I can totally understand that losing a mother is one of life’s hardest experiences. I can’t imagine the depth of your grief. Your mother was a truly remarkable person with a kind heart, loving and full of wisdom. I will always appreciate her strong positive gestures
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the toughest time of chemotherapy. During the sessions, she fought hard against the fight of cancer. On top of that, she
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inspired everyone other by giving patients motivational speeches.
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that, she had great hospitality skills. Her nature of welcoming all of us by preparing delicious meals was esteemed. It’s okay to feel overwhelmed by
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sorrow or unsure about how to move forward. It’s not easy to come out instantly, but you should give time to yourself for healing. Please don’t hesitate to lean on me as I am always ready to help you in every phase of life. You don’t have to face it alone. Warm Regards, Sarab
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coherence and cohesion
There are minor grammatical errors, such as 'everyone other' which should be 'everyone else'. Proofreading can help in catching these.
task achievement
Consider providing more personal anecdotes or memories to strengthen the emotional connection.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a warm and empathetic tone, suitable for a letter of sympathy.
greeting and closing
Your opening and closing are appropriately structured and contribute to the letter's warmth.
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