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You want to sell some of your furniture.you think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.

#furniture #friend
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Dear Amie, I hope you're doing well. The reason to write
this
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letterbis
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letter is
letters
 to let you know that
i'm
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I'm
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 selling furniture that you found amazing. As you know, you visited my house
last
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 time I told you that I'm planning to own an apartment. Well, that's
a great news
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great news
a piece of great news
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 to tell you I bought
new
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a new
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 apartment and moving in after two weeks.
However
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, the place is far from here and the living room is not big enough to
accomodate
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accommodate
entire
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the entire
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 furniture. I thought you would be interested in buying it as you were asking about it. Particularly, I would like to sell
sofa
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a sofa
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 set and a dining table.
Sofa
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The sofa
A sofa
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 set is made of leather and is in good condition. There are six chairs with wooden dining
table
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tables
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 which are quite comfortable and are
well- maintained
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well-maintained
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. You can come
this
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 weekend to view the furniture again as
this
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 would
also
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 be
great
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a great
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 time for get together . Please let me know
of
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if
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 you're keen
in
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on
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 buying it. I considered you before others because you are my close friend. Best Regards, John
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coherence and cohesion
Ensure grammatical accuracy to enhance readability.
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Avoid minor spelling errors for better clarity.
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Be more formal in tone to match the context of the letter.
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The purpose of the letter is clearly stated at the beginning.
coherence and cohesion
The logical progression of the letter helps in conveying the message smoothly.
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Specific details about the furniture were provided.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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