The line graph shows the size of the global population from 1400 to 2000, and the pie charts show the global population by region in 1900 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the size of the global population from 1400 to 2000, and the pie charts show the global population by region in 1900 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts compare data about the percentage of global communities who lived on 5 various continents around the world at 2 points in time namely, 1900 and 2000.
Overall
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, it was important that the proportion of people in all areas other than
Africa
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and Latine America reduced;
however
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, the number of international citizens increased over the period of one century.
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the diagrams, the figure of people who lived on Earth climbed from 1.6 Billion in 1900 to 6 Billion in 2000. Asian, the main communities who had the highest portion at both times, formed 60% in 1900;
then
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in 2000, Asians from former Soviet Asia made up 54% and populations of Middle East and North
Africa
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composed 6%. Europe's with Russia's inhabitants constituted exactly a quarter in 1900;
thereafter
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, it declined to 14% in 2000. The graphs demonstrate that North American and Others made up the same fraction in both times at respectively 5% and 3%.
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, people who lived in
Africa
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and Latin America reported 4% and 3% after that, they rose to 10% for
Africa
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and 8% for Latin America & Caribbean.
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