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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides key information about the mass of
tea
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 and
coffee
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that
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produced by four different countries (Canada, the United
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States
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, the United Kingdom, and Germany). A glance at the figure reveals that most countries imported more
coffee
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 than
tea
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 except the UK.
According to
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 the graph, the amount of
coffee
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 was approximately 40000
tonnes
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 in Canada and the US, and almost half of that amount represented how much
tea
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imported
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was imported
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 by those two countries. In terms of the UK, the United Kingdom imported the smallest number of
coffee
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, exactly 30000
tonnes
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 of
coffee
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,
however
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, 80000
tonnes
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 of
tea
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 make up the highest amount of
tea
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 produced by the UK.
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, 40000
tonnes
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 of
tea
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 and 50000
tonnes
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 of
coffee
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imported
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were imported
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 by Germany.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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