some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Others think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Advertising has been one of the most significant tools to promote

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products

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distribution among people by their attention's captivation.

Someone

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believes

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believe

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, that

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way of

brands'

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marketing has become obsolete,

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others believe that it still meets its purpose. I firmly believe that the latest opinion

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more likely to be true than the former one. Since the beginning, it has been clear that

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of

products

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should be organised and supervised.

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, it was the

start

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point of advertising.

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, nowadays the original tools are unlikely to win

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the audience

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audience

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attention. There are several reasons for it,

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as old-fashioned choices of ads and its becoming of everyday life's part.

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,

TV's

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ads, billboards, and even

popping up

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advertisements on the Internet are out of fashion now, as

it

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they

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just

get

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skipped

ot

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or

missed and

are

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no longer believed by

public

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the public

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.

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, there were a lot of cases

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unrealistic specifics of certain

products

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that

lead

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to several

jurisdictical

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jurisdictional

problems for the companies and

a

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apply

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huge profits lost from their side.

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, advertising is still likely to be used

but

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in other ways.

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out,

marketing

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the marketing

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sector has not been sitting without any

progresion

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progress

. One of the most important

rule

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of advertising is to adjust to modern

criterias

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criteria

. Indeed, billboards and other tools from the previous

pargraph

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paragraph

are no longer in the competition, but using

influencers

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influencers'

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help has become a new idea. Obviously, it is less affordable since they

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charge a promotion fee, but a

realtime

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unboxing and describing of a novel product are more likely to have merits among the targeted audience.

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, social

media's

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media

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influencers on Instagram or other platforms are making their reviews online, so

public

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the public

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can be

awared

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aware

of the true nature of their emotions and

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products

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features, which is quite

winning

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a winning

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characteristic.

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,

advertising

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advertising's

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purpose

it

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is

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to lure people to purchase a promoted product. Unfortunately, classical methods

are

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no longer

captivates

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captivate

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public's

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the public's

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attention,

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thus

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is

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are

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less

persuative

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persuasive

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, I believe

advetising

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advertising

is still on the top

,

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because new methods are

proved

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proven

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to be more and more

efficiant

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efficient

to win

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in winning

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audience

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audiences

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.