The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021. Kasiyet

The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked

cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021.

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The line chart illustrates the number of cigarette smokers among British men and women from 2011 to 2021.
Overall
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, the smoking rates in the UK dropped considerably over the entire period,
although
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men continued to smoke more than women throughout the 10 years. For British men, the number of smokers fell sharply from slightly over 4
million
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in 2011 to around 2.5
million
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in 2013. After that, it fluctuated between approximately 2.5
million
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and 3
million
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from 2014 to 2019.
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, the male smoking rate dropped significantly in the next 2 years, falling to just above 1
million
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. As for women, their smoking rate
also
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decreased quickly at the start of the period, dropping from just over 3.5
million
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to just under 1
million
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in 2013. It
then
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remained relatively stable, fluctuating between just below 1.5
million
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and just over 1.5
million
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from 2014 to 2018.
Afterward
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, it steadily declined to just over 0.5
million
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by 2021
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