You have been asked to organise a special dinner to celebrate your company’s achievements this year. Write a letter to the restaurant you have chosen. In your letter say : * why you want to come to the restaurant and when * how many people will attend the dinner * what special requirements you have

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope that you are doing well. The purpose of writing

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letter is to inquire about a corporate annual event that our company is planning to host at your restaurant. Every year our company host an annual dinner party to appreciate all the

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contributions to its growth and success.

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year we are planning to celebrate

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key event at your venue on the 24th of December with approximately 35 guests including employees and our shareholders.

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to that, we would like to request a few special arrangements for

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occasion. First and foremost, vegetarian meals will be required for at least half of our guests

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gluten-free options.

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that, a stage and a private room will be mandatory as we would like to have some privacy during

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dinner. Please let me know if the 24th of December is available and

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if you have any other questions. Sincerely, Ruchin Patel

ruchin27

Dec 24, 2024

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Task Achievement

Clarify the relationship between employee appreciation and the event's special arrangements for clearer task achievement.

Coherence & Cohesion

Clear and polite introduction and closing that fits the formal letter tone.

Coherence & Cohesion

Each paragraph focuses on a separate aspect of the letter's purpose, achieving a single idea per paragraph effectively.

Task Achievement

The tone of the letter is formal and appropriate for the context of a business event inquiry.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

162 words

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