You are bothered by the amount of trash in your local park.Write a letter to the head of the city park department .In your letter: • Describe the problem with the trash • Explain why it is a problem • Say what you think the city should do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope that you are doing well. The purpose of writing
this
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letter is to bring your attention to the matter of access garbage
that is
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dumped into our local park located in the centre of our city. There has been a growing number of people dumping their trash near the estate
due to
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the lack of a designated junk area. Since the bins are now overfilled, residents have been throwing them around the bins.
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, now it has taken almost all the back area of the garden.
Besides
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that, because of a lack of cleanliness in that area, there is a growing number of insects as well and the unpleasant smell is making it unenjoyable
as well as
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making people sick. Perhaps, the city garden department should clean the place immediately, which will at least make the part pleasant again. But the authority should
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bring
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attention to the city's cleaning department to add a few more designated spots to collect waste. I hope that
this
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letter will help you understand the core issue of over-the-limit trash in our local park. Sincerely, Ruchin Patel
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains one single idea to maintain clarity.
task achievement
Provide more specific details or evidence to enhance the completeness of the response.
coherence cohesion
Your letter provides a clear and polite greeting and closing.
task achievement
You maintain a suitable and formal writing tone throughout the letter.
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