You are bothered by the amount of trash in your local park.Write a letter to the head of the city park department .In your letter: • Describe the problem with the trash • Explain why it is a problem • Say what you think the city should do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope that you are doing well. The purpose of writing

this

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letter is to bring your attention to the matter of access garbage

that is

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dumped into our local park located in the centre of our city. There has been a growing number of people dumping their trash near the estate

due to

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the lack of a designated junk area. Since the bins are now overfilled, residents have been throwing them around the bins.

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, now it has taken almost all the back area of the garden.

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that, because of a lack of cleanliness in that area, there is a growing number of insects as well and the unpleasant smell is making it unenjoyable

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making people sick. Perhaps, the city garden department should clean the place immediately, which will at least make the part pleasant again. But the authority should

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bring

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attention to the city's cleaning department to add a few more designated spots to collect waste. I hope that

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letter will help you understand the core issue of over-the-limit trash in our local park. Sincerely, Ruchin Patel

ruchin27Tue Dec 24 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph contains one single idea to maintain clarity.

task achievement

Provide more specific details or evidence to enhance the completeness of the response.

coherence cohesion

Your letter provides a clear and polite greeting and closing.

task achievement

You maintain a suitable and formal writing tone throughout the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

190 words

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