The chart below shows the total number of journeys per year for a European city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of journeys per year for a European city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the rate of
car
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trips
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per year and per
day
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for
residents
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and
non-
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residents
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in European
city
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cities
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from 1996 and 2005.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
number
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of
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residents
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residents'
resident's
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car
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trips
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it
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apply
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decline
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declined
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during
whole
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the whole
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years
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year
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,
whereas
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the
number
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of
non-
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residents
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it
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apply
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fluctuated during
whole
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the whole
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years
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year
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.
To begin
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with, during the first four
years
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the
number
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of
residents
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witnessed a dramatic
number
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of
car
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trips
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which was around 10000 per
day
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,
while
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the
number
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of
non-
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residents
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was less than
residents
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it was around just between five thousand and six thousand per
day
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during (1996-1995) Following the
last
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six
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years
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years,
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the
number
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of
residents
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saw a significant
decreased
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decrease
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in the average of
car
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trips
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formed
that
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apply
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between 5000 and 4000 per
day
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.
In contrast
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to
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the amount of
non-
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residents
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went up and down which was around 8000 per
day
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in 1999 and
at the end
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of the year in 2005 was comprised of 5000 per
day
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. The most interesting that between 1995 and 2000 there was
a
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apply
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parking
meters
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meter
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presented
into
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in
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city
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the city
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centre.
In addition
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to that between 2002 and 2006
the
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apply
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Westgate
street
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Street
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and
park lane
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Park Lane
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closed to traffic.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, trips, day, residents, non-residents, number, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuating trend
  • Peaks and troughs
  • Correlate
  • Infrastructure
  • Long-term growth/decline
  • Transportation sector
  • Innovations in transport
  • Historical events
  • Public transport strikes
  • Economic changes
  • Comparison
  • Broader trend
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