All criminals should have access to education and rehabilitation programs while in prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree on this IELTS topic?

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the opportunity to learn and complete their

study

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with psychological treatment if needed. I totally agree, as it could give them the

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to survive after finishing their sentence.

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, rehabilitating some of them, curing their mental problems, and teaching them how to be a

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of society.

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are

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of the community, and we could teach them to be an active

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of these communities.

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, all the

prisons

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facilities should include schools to prepare them for the work

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after regaining their freedom.

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, because they lack the requirements to find jobs when they get out, they will return to their previous criminal activities, as they don't have the skills to walk

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the right path. But if they had the

chance

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to get

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education, the vast majority would admire the

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and use it in the after-prison life.

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, a report that had been published in the BBC News journal indicates that more than

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of the young

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aren't educated and

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one of the major developers of criminal actions. Another reason

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those individuals

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create criminal

behaviors

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is mental health, caused by

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exposure to trauma, abuse ,violence,

bullying

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and bullying

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in

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their

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early ages. And

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criminal action is to resent their deep anger. By allowing those

prisoners

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to conduct rehabilitation programs led by psychotherapists, they will have the ability to resolve their mental issues and get the

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to relieve the dark side of their emotions.

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will make it easier for them to be a

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of society after getting out of prison. For an institute, a psychological data analysis made in one of the UK prisons discloses that a considerable proportion of those

prisoners

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are diagnosed with mental health effects without any personal previous knowledge.

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,

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prisoners

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of the community, and we should treat them as that. They must get the

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to learn and create a better future for themselves,

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also

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to be treated

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any mental disabilities.