Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Inevitable practices of human beings have generated several problems
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ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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. Some argue that these actions are irreplaceable,
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others believe that wise measures
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should be implemented to mitigate environmental degradation.
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natural habitats,
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, others including myself, are positive. The most common reason people believe that negative effects on natural habitats are unaltered is because of weak regulations or lack of supervision of
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habitats.
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fewer strict laws and weak management of reducing deforestation and industrial emissions, many
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are no longer available on
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planet so the number of
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species
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that are not only endangered but extinct
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has increased. Dodo and some flower
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have completely disappeared,
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. The less government make stricter rules, the harder it will be to improve the
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habitat.
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persistent degradation of the environment will not innovate the natural habitat.
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to the second argument, significant steps should be taken to change the situation in order to reduce the negative effects of human practices on
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. Laws to manage industrial waste and cutting down trees should be enforced strictly so that the environment can be conserved. After supporting eco-friendly companies and eco-forestry, the increasing number of endangered
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will be decreased which will help change
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scenario. scenario. If these steps are taken seriously and provide awareness among people,
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will develop a responsible initiative.
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my personal view, I believe that there is still hope for improving the natural habitat
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government involvement and providing education about why we should protect
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. In conclusion,
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humans have contributed significantly to degrading the environment, the engagement of the government will help to reverse it as governments have the power to develop
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financially and potentially.
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The essay presents a clear discussion of both viewpoints, which contributes positively to the task response.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • extinct
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • habitat destruction
  • mitigate
  • reverse
  • stricter regulations
  • protected areas
  • endangered species
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • biodiversity
  • consequences
  • renewable energy sources
  • organic farming
  • eco-tourism
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable practices
  • natural ecosystems
  • preserve biodiversity
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