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Here’s a question for IELTS General Question: Some people believe that learning a second language at an early age is beneficial for children, while others think it is an unnecessary burden. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Would you like tips or a sample essay for this question?

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A significant number of people believe that learning
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another
language
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 during childhood is beneficial for the
children
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. Others
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 argued that
this
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 can give unnecessary pressure. I strongly agree with the former view, as
child's
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 brain can quickly grab new things and
this
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 will equip them with valuable
skills
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.
However
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,
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 can cause mental
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 and workload can reduce their physical activities. To commence with, many people
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 that extra learning at
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stage
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 can increase mental
stress
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 which can affect
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overall
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 well-being.
Children
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 can suffer from depression & anxiety which can reduce their progress in other subjects as at
initial
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stage
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 of life, they are not able to handle more pressure.
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, a recent survey by Roland Michener Public School, Ajax found that 65%
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children
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of children
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 who were learning
French
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the French
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language
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 from their first grade were facing difficulties
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 in
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English and
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Science subjects.
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, extra curriculum means
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extra homework which can significantly impact
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their physical health, because of the minimum time for
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sports and
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the
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physical games.
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, critics argued that understanding
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different
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language
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 since childhood has numerous advantages and they gave various reasons to support their point.
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,
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children's
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children
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 have a
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stress free
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 brain with sharp memory and
this
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 mind has a great potential to grasp learning as compared to the
adults
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 brain.
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,
this
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 will equip them with some particular
skills
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such
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 as communication
skills
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 & critical thinking
skills
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 which
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 critical for better development at every
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 of life.
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, they will
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 to speak like native speakers and they can grab more opportunities in their home country
as well as
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 overseas after becoming adults.
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,
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recent research
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 Oxford University concluded that 95%
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children
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of children
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 who learn the Spanish
language
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 at school have the same accent as
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native speakers.
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, I believe
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stage
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 is the best period to learn any new skill,
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however
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this
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 trend has some potential drawbacks but
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 results
overshadows
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 the demerits. I completely agree with the given notion, as
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 mind is free from every kind of pressure and
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 more potential to add new things.
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 mental
stress
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 and reduced physical activities are potential setbacks which can not be ignored.
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Language Accuracy
Watch out for minor grammatical errors, although they don't significantly impact your score, they may affect overall clarity at times.
Task Achievement
The essay provides a balanced discussion of both views, clearly supporting your opinion with logical reasons.
Task Achievement
The essay includes good examples that are relevant and help support your points effectively, like the survey and research studies mentioned.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your introduction and conclusion are well-structured, effectively framing your arguments and summing up your viewpoint nicely.
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