The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The map illustrates the town of Garlsdon, where a plan is
under way
to build a new supermarket.
Correct your spelling
underway
Overall
, the town consists of four main zones. At the Linking Words
center
, there is a no-traffic zone surrounded by a larger industrial Change the spelling
centre
area
, which contains two smaller housing sections at either end. Beyond Use synonyms
this
lies an even larger rural Linking Words
area
.
In the northwest part of the map, a railway and a main road intersect the suburb. Regarding the proposed locations for the new supermarket, the first proposed site is situated between the railway and the main road, approximately 12 Use synonyms
kilometers
from Hindon, an Change the spelling
kilometres
area
with a population of 10,000. Meanwhile, the second proposed site is located in the city Use synonyms
center
, within the no-traffic zone. Change the spelling
centre
However
, the railway runs through Linking Words
this
Linking Words
area
toward Cransdon, which is located 25 Use synonyms
kilometers
southeast in the countryside. Change the spelling
kilometres
Additionally
, Linking Words
a main road branches
off from the industrial section and leads to the southwestern part of the rural Correct the article-noun agreement
main road branches
a main road branch
area
, 16 Use synonyms
kilometers
from Brandson, another town with a population of 15,000.Change the spelling
kilometres
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