The chart shows the number of information student studying at a UK universities between 1995 and 2015

The chart shows the number of information student studying at a UK universities between 1995 and 2015
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the number of information student studying at a UK universities between 1995 and 2015
The line graph illustrates information about how many overseas students studied at British University between 1995 and 2015
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, most of the entrance came to the UK for university from Asia,
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the countries were not as numerous. Accounting for nearly 60 students who started learning in 1995 who came from Asia and their numbers kept rising to 120 in 2015. At the same time, European students' rate remained stable with some fluctuations, from about 50 over the two decades. North American citizens who visited Britain
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at 40 in 1995 and until 2010
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level stayed steadily
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rapidly increased to approximately 65 in 2015 African people scale was one of the lowest ones in
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line graph. In 1995 it started with 20 and maintained the balance until 2005. In the middle of 2010 year,
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score grew steadily
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returned to the past level of, 20 in 2015.

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