The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon
The diagram illustrates the life cycle of a particular fish, which is
salmon
. Use synonyms
Overall
, there are several different stages from being an egg to reaching adulthood in the open sea, which varies in size and occurs in three distinct environments.
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Firstly
, the Linking Words
salmon
eggs reside in the upper river that has slow-moving water for around five to six months, the eggs lie under the reeds and are covered by small stones. Use synonyms
Secondly
, they hatch and are called fry, which Linking Words
measure
Correct subject-verb agreement
measures
for
3 to 8 centimetres long, staying in the lower river with fast-movement currents for approximately four years before moving to the open sea. Change preposition
apply
Thirdly
, they turn into a smolt Linking Words
that is
12 to 15 centimetres, which is generally larger.
The smolt migrates to the open sea where they live for about five years until they mature into adult Linking Words
salmon
that reach a size of 70 to 78 centimetres long. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the adult Linking Words
salmon
return to the upper river to reproduce the Use synonyms
salmon
eggs. Use synonyms
This
life cycle will be repeated continuously from phase one to three, from spawning to maturating.Linking Words
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