The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
These two maps illustrate the significant changes that occurred between 2001 and 2009.
Overall
, the library underwent a number of dramatic transformations, the most notable of which were the establishment of a children's section and the addition of computers, Linking Words
along with
the reduction of both the history and self-help sections.
The librarian's desk, Linking Words
as well as
the staircase, remained in the southern part of the room throughout the examined period, Linking Words
while
newspapers and periodicals were replaced with films and DVDs. Linking Words
Additionally
, the tables were modified from eight square tables to four rectangular ones, which are now conjoined.
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Furthermore
, computers were installed below the film area to facilitate their use.
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Moreover
, the fiction section was transformed into a space for children's books. Linking Words
As a result
, the self-help and history sections were reduced, Linking Words
while
new sections for fiction, kitchen, economics, and law were added to meet the growing needs of patrons.Linking Words
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