The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia, for the period from 2000 to 2020.
The given line graph illustrates how many people took part in various activities in Melbourne's social centre between 2000 and 2020.
Overall
, it can be seen that over the period the first place was accounted for a movie club, with more than 60 people each year. Linking Words
Additionally
, martial arts were Linking Words
also
stable throughout 2 decades, reaching the range from 30 to 40 individuals.
On the one hand, there are 2 types of activities where numbers climbed drastically. Linking Words
For example
, table tennis, starting with just above 20 participants, increased to over 50 in 2020. Linking Words
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a
music club had no individuals at the beginning, Correct article usage
the
however
, in 2020, it was made up of about 15 Australians.
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On the other hand
, amateur dramatics classes became less popular over these 20 years, continuously decreasing by 5 participants each 5 years, starting from 2005. Linking Words
Thus
, the Linking Words
last
observation contained 5 people only.
In conclusion, Australians' dedication to sports can be noticed, followed by the lack of interest in dramatic lessons.Linking Words
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