You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. in your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear Dhura,
I hope you are doing well. I am happy to know that you have been offered a course at Waterloo University where I
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, I would suggest you live near the university. I used to live near Fairway Station because it was closer to the campus and easier to commute.
Now you might be thinking about how to find accommodation. The best websites are Facebook Marketplace and Kijiji. They both are authentic and cheaper for the students.
Despite, being authentic websites there are scammers so be careful. There are some mistakes students make when choosing accommodation. One is paying full rent just by looking at the pictures of the place and another is giving cash to the broker.
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, I wish you all the best for your new journey and feel free to call me if you need some suggestions.
Thank you.
Your loving,
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