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The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
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These bar charts illustrate the
amount
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 of
waste
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 collected by a recycling centre during four years from 2011 to 2015. It is clear from the graphs that the highest
amount
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 of
waste
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 was paper
among
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in
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 the
periode
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period
.
According to
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 what is shown, the quantity
for
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of
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 glass
was remain
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remained
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 steady
along
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over
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 the
periode
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period
, it had
a
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apply
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tiny
diffrences
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differences
among
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over
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 the years. In 2013 glass was the highest
amount
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 among the other
waste
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.
However
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 , in 2011 garden
waste
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 was
with
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apply
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32 tonnes, but
then
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 fell the rate dramatically in the following year. After
that
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that,
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 it kept
increase
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increasing
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 slightly . The
last
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 year of statistics which was 2015 the highest
amount
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 in all
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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type
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types
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 of
waste
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,
increase
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increased
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 swiftly
espicially
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especially
the
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apply
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paper
waste
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 . In
the
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apply
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2012
tins
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tin
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waste
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 was only
with
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twenty-seven
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27
 tonnes , in the next year the rate kept
go
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going
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 up slightly.
To sum up
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, we could say that the most significant
difference
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differences
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 were between paper
waste
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 and
garden
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the garden
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 during all the
periode
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periods
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste collection
  • recycling centre
  • efficiency
  • demand
  • peak point
  • fluctuations
  • categories
  • significant growth
  • strategies
  • stabilization
  • public participation
  • volume
  • capacity
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