Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
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is considered to be animal abuse, a small portion thinks that there are still some discoveries to be made. Nowadays, suffering cannot be justified as every living being has neurones and, Linking Words
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Even though some individuals justify the mistreatment of animals, it should not be the norm. The population is conscious about what are the consequences of any kind of experimentation on them, and it is considered to be a huge problem in actuality. It has been found that not only these creatures are affected but the humans that do it are too, Linking Words
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the first ones are physically and mentally damaged, the second could develop mental issues related to the situation that they are causing. Linking Words
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being vaccinated with different doses related to diseases that end slowly killing them.
Scientists have been trying to figure out how can be these subjects replaced as the experiments are essential to keep investigating and developing new products for people's well-being. Lately, the use of artificial intelligence has allowed to creation of new tissues that can be used as substitutes. Linking Words
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, in 2024, in a research centre in Europe, scientists found out that by using IA and 3D printing machines living tissue could be created, so they designed and built skin to try new skincare.
To summarize, even though some people consider that animals could help to make new discoveries, the vast majority of the population is sure that using new tools animal experimentation and abuse could definitely be outlawed.Linking Words
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task achievement
Provide a more nuanced discussion by presenting the arguments of both sides equally. You should consider offering more examples or perspectives supporting the idea that animal experimentation can lead to significant scientific breakthroughs.
coherence cohesion
Ensure your conclusion summarizes key points from the essay and clearly states your final stance on the issue.
task achievement
You have effectively highlighted recent technological alternatives, such as AI and 3D printing, as substitutes for animal experimentation.
coherence cohesion
Your essay is well-structured with a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps in understanding your argument.
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