Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing •describe your suitability for this area of work •say when you can attend an interview
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter with regard to applying for a vacant position at your restaurant.
To begin
with, my name is Parthkumar Parmar and I am an international student in Canada currently I am pursuing my post-graduation studies in hospitality management.Apart from
this
, I am actively looking for an opportunity to support my survival in this
nation,therefore
I am applying for a job at your hotel.
Besides
this
,my college time is Monday to Thursday in the morning,so I am available to work on weekdays from afternoon to night.However
, On weekends I can able to work a full day without any restrictions. Moreover
, as I earlier mention that I enrolled into
the hospitality course,which can help me Change preposition
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to
understand working ethics and strategies.Verb problem
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Lastly
, I have a
prior experience working in a restaurant as a cashier,which can definitely help me to adjust to your working environment.
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In addition
, I am ready to attend an interview process during this
week anytime,because I am on my reading vacation. I am giving you my contact number and e-mail ID,so you can reach me for further
process.
Please let me know if you require any further
information.
yours sincerely
ParthkumarSubmitted by pp6859 on
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task achievement
Make sure to proofread your letter for grammatical errors and typos. For example, 'can able to work' should be corrected to 'can work' or 'am able to work.'
coherence and cohesion
To improve coherence, consider breaking down some of the longer sentences into shorter ones to enhance readability. This makes each point stand out more clearly.
task achievement
You have effectively addressed all the points required in the prompt, including explaining what you are currently doing, describing your suitability, and stating when you can attend an interview.
task achievement
The letter maintains a formal and respectful tone throughout, which is appropriate for a job application.
coherence and cohesion
The structure of the letter is logical, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
coherence and cohesion
You have properly greeted the recipient at the beginning and signed off correctly at the end.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite