In many countries, governments spend large sums of money on the arts and this is supported by some taxpayers as worthwhile. Others, however, think that this money would be better spent on health and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In a country, the government takes

money

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in the form of tax from residents. The amount of tax varies from 10 to 50% depending on the

nation

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. Later the government spends the

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on various things for the country's welfare . In many countries, the government spends large sums of

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on the

arts

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is supported by some taxpayers

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Others think

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money

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would be better spent on

health

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and

education

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. I partially agree with the people who think that it is worthwhile to spend on

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. I will elaborate on it in

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paragraphs and give my opinions.

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with, a

nation

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runs on

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which comes from residence in the form of tax. I think investing in

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is one of the best ways to spend

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.

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should be considered as an investment because

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and decoration attract foreign persons.

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will increase international tourism and indirectly

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in

increment

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the increment

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of

economy

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of the

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. Later

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capital can be used on other important subjects like

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and

education

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.

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, one of the best examples of a

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that spends large sums of

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on art is Dubai. Dubai is the richest country in the world because most of the

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comes from international tourism in Dubai.

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spending on

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is a good practice, sometimes

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can be proven false because there are chances of corruption in making sculptures and monuments. Political officials take large sums of capital and use it for their personal stuff.

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, I think spending

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on

education

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and

health

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would be a better choice for some reason

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of decorations.

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there are many countries that spend more on

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and

health

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and into the list of the top 10 richest countries. in conclusion, I think spending on

health

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and

education

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will be beneficial in developing lands

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spending on art should be beneficial for developed lands.