Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Others think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The markets nowadays are becoming increasingly competitive and how to advertise effectively will determine the success of companies and projects.

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some suggest that advertising plays an important role in encouraging purchasing,

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others criticise the lack of innovation

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current

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essay will discuss both these views, followed by showing my perspective. On one hand, it is widely believed that

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encourage customer consumption significantly. The story-telling approaches of different advertising forms are designed in an effective way

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that a vast amount of key

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delivered within

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period of time. In

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way, consumers who are exposed to troves of data and

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are highly likely to be attracted.

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, advanced technologies these days,

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as

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recommendation

systems, would

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back online advertising up

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complex algorithms which are competent at pinpointing

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of specific users. All these encourage purchasing

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substantially

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, you might frequently hear people blaming

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advertisements

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are gradually becoming unified. The rapid developments of internet techniques and the drastic digital transformation are bringing the public to a

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blast

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information

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situation could potentially lead to the so-called 'appreciation

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tiredness

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, including the

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, are becoming less impressive and

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contribute weaker in terms of customer

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, a majority of

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companies today focus on the quantity

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of the quality of their promotion strategies, resulting in

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lacking

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aesthetic

and emotional values.

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In conclusion,

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product promotions nowadays tend to lack

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innovations, their power in terms of inspiring customer

comsumption

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consumption

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cutting-edge techniques and processes

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should not be overlooked.