The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant
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The chart illustrates the crime statistics from three different areas in New
port
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city centre from 2003 to 2012.
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, we can see that from 2003 to 2004 crimes in
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the bulrglary
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bulrglary
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burglary
slightly rose from 3500 to almost 4000, but
then
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constantly fell to 1000 in 2008 to
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maintain basically the same until 2012.
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, the statistics show that violent
acts
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in
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of
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robbery have not changed much over the years, as they have been always around 500 and 1000.
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, in the
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zone, car theft, there were almost 300 hundred violent
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in 2003, and in 2006 the area had its lowest number at 1000, but over the years crime has risen to its highest point in 2012 at 2800 violent
acts
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. After taking all the details, we can conclude that in burglary criminal
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have fallen over the years, and in the other two areas have been pretty stable.
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