The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities over three time periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities over three time periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented bar graph represents the total of individuals living in five big capital cities in three different observed periods from 1970 to 2010. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that all notions had the same trend by increasing the population and reaching a peak
at the end
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year. In detail, Tokyo had the highest
individuals
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staying in
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city compared to all cities and reached the highest statistics at just beneath 30
in
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the end of the time.
Likewise
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, Bombay
also
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had the same level as the total population in 2010, before skyrocketing
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25 after 20 years.
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, Shanghai has a slight difference level in the two initial years,
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jumped by around 10. Turning to the rest of the categories, namely New York and Jakarta, New York contributed only a few changes in its number of citizens in the time
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frame by around 10.
On the other hand
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, there is a significant incline from 1970 to 2010 in Jakarta.
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