The process diagram details the steps by which liquid chocolate is produced from cocoa beans. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.
The diagram describes information for
cacao
and Use synonyms
chocolate
production.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
chocolate
production is a man-made and linear process which includes Use synonyms
total
of 10 steps. It starts with growing Add an article
a total
cacao
trees in South America, Africa, and Indonesia and ends with the inner part being pressed and liquid Use synonyms
chocolate
produced.
The process begins with planting the Use synonyms
cacao
trees and waiting for the Use synonyms
cacao
pod to ripen and shows a red color and workers collect it , Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Cacao
Correct article usage
The Cacao
beans
inside it are white Use synonyms
colour
. The Change preposition
in colour
beans
are left to ferment, which is a critical step that helps develop the characteristic flavours of Use synonyms
chocolate
. The purpose of Use synonyms
that is
to reduce the initial bitterness and astringency of the Linking Words
beans
. Use synonyms
Then
Linking Words
cacao
Use synonyms
beans
are dried in the sun . Use synonyms
The next step is
packing and Linking Words
place
the Wrong verb form
placing
cacao
Use synonyms
beans
in large bags and Use synonyms
weigh
them. Those bags will be transported by train and large truck to the factory. Workers in the factory will roast Wrong verb form
weighing
cacao
Use synonyms
beans
at a temperature of 350 degrees . Use synonyms
Then
they are ground to remove the outer shells . Linking Words
Finally
, the inner part is pressed liquid Linking Words
chocolate
Use synonyms
produced
.Add a missing verb
is produced
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