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The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. The given charts depict the following ways: TV, radio, print, online and not specified.
According to
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 the chart,
two fifths
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 (40%) of
respondents
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 in Canada choose TV. Just under half of the
people
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 chose the way to access news online - they accounted for 36%. Significantly fewer
people
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 chose print - only 14%. Half as many
respondents
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 chose the radio option. And the smallest number of
people
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 answered "not specified" - 3%. In the chart of
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 in Australia, a significant number of
people
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 answered "online" - 52%. The percentage of
people
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 who chose the answer "TV" was 37%. 7% of the
respondents
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 answered "print". Among those who chose, the answer "radio" was 2%, and
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 2% of
people
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 answered "not specified”.
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, analyzing the two charts of different countries, you can see that the percentage ratio is not much different.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words respondents, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "compare" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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