The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the percentages of donations that an American children's charity received and spent over one year.
It is clear that
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the most significant
income
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was received by far in the form of
donatated
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donated
food,
while
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the largest sums were contributed to program services.
Overall
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, we can see that the total amount of money donated was larger than those spent. Focusing first on the revenue sources, around 85% came as donated food,
while
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for the community contributions and program revenue, the corresponding figures were nearly 10% and less than 2%, respectively. When it comes to investment
income
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, government
grands
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grants
, and other
income
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, they enlarge the budget of the charity organisations located in the USA marginally, only by 0.2% each. As for the main areas
which
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on which
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money was used
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, over 95 % was allocated to program services, as opposed to just almost 3% on
fundrasing
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fundraising
and less than 2% - on management and general. Notably, the annual
income
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of a charity for children was higher by
approxomately
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approximately
340,000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
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