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The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015
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The provided chart illustrates the mass of
wastes
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waste
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 received by a recycling centre over a 5-year period.
Overall
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, each
sorts
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sort
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 of waste remained
its
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in its
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 position
throughtout
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throughout
 the surveyed period, except for paper
who
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which
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 witnessed a slight reduction in 2013. As seen from the figure, clearly explained the paper depicts constant growth with a range from 57 to 70
moreover
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,
single
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a single
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 drop recognized in 2013 captured 40
tons
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 of excess. Glass trash exhibited a fluctuant magnitude of recycled
tons
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whereas
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 the 2011 and 2013 depict equal numbers with the top value noticed in 2015 that recorded 52
tons
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. Tins and backyard illustrate similar magnitudes ranging in thirty except Garden during 2012 captured the lowest recorded recycled
tons
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 in weight which represented 15.
To conclude
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, paper displays the highest values among other recycled wastes followed by glass and tins
along with
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 the garden. In terms of comparison in years, 2015 captured the highest climb.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "depicts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling centre
  • waste management
  • total waste collected
  • trends
  • categories
  • significant increases/decreases
  • analysis
  • public awareness
  • recycling policies
  • implications
  • future strategies
  • sustainable practices
  • waste reduction
  • data interpretation
  • environmental impact
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