You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to show my excitement related to the training course in which I am quite interested.
As I am working as a manager in your organization; therefore
, I would like to enroll
in business management so I can learn the trade tactics that tend to enhance the company's growth.
Moving Change the spelling
enrol
further
, If the trade can reduce the fees, it would be beneficial for me since I can take admission as soon as possible. Apart from that, the organization can provide assistance by online mode; thus
, I can attend at home rather than at the office.
The main advantage that I can get while
doing this
course is that I can implement the business techniques at my present job that would not only incline the sale of my company but also
get the promotion.
I hope you will consider me for this
course and will await your prompt response prior to involved.
Yours Faithfully,
Jaspreet kaur
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Kaur
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General
Begin by addressing your manager more specifically if you know their name. This makes your letter seem more personalized.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use clear paragraphing to separate your introduction, each point you are discussing, and your conclusion. This helps in maintaining a logical flow and making your letter easier to follow.
Task Achievement
Elaborate further on how exactly the course could be useful for your job beyond just promotion and increasing sales. Specific examples or scenarios could reinforce your argument.
Language
Consider amending the phrase 'If the trade can reduce the fees' to something more clear, like 'If it is possible for the organization to assist with the course fees, this would greatly facilitate my enrollment.'
Language
In your conclusion, instead of saying 'will await your prompt response prior to involved,' consider 'I look forward to your prompt response and hope for your support in this endeavor.' This offers a more polished and clear request.