The diagram below shows the process of making cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The given diagram describes how

cheese

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is produced

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, there are two ways to make

chese

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these

cheese

that are traditional and

motst

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most

chese

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cheese

making. The process is

man made

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man-made

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which is

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starting

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with

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curding and

ends

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ending

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with ripening.

This

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process includes ten steps. First of all, there is a

slightly

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slight

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differene

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different

difference

between the

traditiona

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traditional

and other

cheese

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producing which is fermenting

mircoorganisms

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microorganisms

are added to raw milk,

while

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rennet (enzyme) is added after the raw milk

went

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goes

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through

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apply

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pasteurization and filed in a standardization. After that, the milk is

curded

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curdled

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in a vas.

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these curds and whey are cut. Following that,

this

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mixture is

stirring

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stirred

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and cooked. After that,

this

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is drained to

seperate

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separate

the whey and the curd is milling. The curd is reasoning with salt on a roller . In the subsequent stage, the salted curd will be mixed with cottage and cream

cheese

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to become fresh

cheese

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, or

pouring

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poured

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into

molds

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moulds

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. these molds will

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pressed to drain additional whey.

Last

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but not least, these

cheese

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rings are stored on

shelf

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the shelf

a shelf

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for

certain

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a certain

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time, and after

ripending

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ripening

they are delivered to customers.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cheese with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

186 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

pasteurization
rennet
curds and whey
starter culture
curdling
fermentation
draining and pressing
aging/maturation
temperature control
bacteria inoculation
enzyme
flavor enhancement

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