In the future, nobody will buy printed books or newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is no denying the fact that reading
books
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newspapers
is important, either to get news or to expand knowledge. Use synonyms
While
it is a commonly held belief that because of the development of technology, most people will tend to read online rather than buy Linking Words
newspapers
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books
, there is Use synonyms
also
an argument that opposes it. From my perspective, I tend to believe that reading online has valuable sources and has become revolutionized these days.
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To begin
with, the popularity of the Internet[a] is a result of its features. Linking Words
In other words
, reading online provides easy accessibility to information and Linking Words
also
to find out about the author. Linking Words
Additionally
, it offers comments from other readers, providing insights into the book or newspaper of interest. Linking Words
In addition
, the internet has enormous free sources of Linking Words
books
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newspapers
, and it provides translations of either, translate the whole text or even single words into various languages with explanations[b]. Use synonyms
For example
, if someone is interested in Shakespeare's novels, he or she can find different novels in many languages and for free by looking for them on Google, Documents, or Website.
Another point to consider is that reading on the Internet[c] allows the reader to keep Linking Words
books
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newspapers
forever. It is Use synonyms
also
worth mentioning that printed papers can tear and get lost. Linking Words
Moreover
, sometimes it is not easy to carry printed material with you in some places, but through technology can read anywhere, like on the bus or Linking Words
airplane
.
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aeroplane
To sum up
, despite people having different views, I believe
the[d] Internet has become prevalent globally. So it is a good selection to replace it with the traditional reading. Eventually, reading online can help individuals to save money.Linking Words
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task achievement
To improve task response, try to further elaborate on the opposing view. Mention reasons people might prefer printed materials and how they offer unique benefits to support a more balanced discussion.
coherence cohesion
To enhance coherence and cohesion, use varied linking words to connect your ideas. Phrases such as 'on the other hand' or 'despite these advantages' can provide a smoother transition between contrasting points.
coherence cohesion
The introduction effectively sets the context by presenting both sides of the argument and stating a clear position.
task achievement
You provide multiple reasons and examples supporting the predominance of online reading, adding robustness to your essay.
coherence cohesion
The use of a concluding paragraph nicely wraps up the essay, reaffirming your stance in a concise manner.