In the future, nobody will buy printed books or newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is no denying the fact that reading

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is important, either to get news or to expand knowledge.

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it is a commonly held belief that because of the development of technology, most people will tend to read online rather than buy

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an argument that opposes it. From my perspective, I tend to believe that reading online has valuable sources and has become revolutionized these days.

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with, the popularity of the Internet[a] is a result of its features.

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, reading online provides easy accessibility to information and

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to find out about the author.

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, it offers comments from other readers, providing insights into the book or newspaper of interest.

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, the internet has enormous free sources of

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and

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, and it provides translations of either, translate the whole text or even single words into various languages with explanations[b].

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, if someone is interested in Shakespeare's novels, he or she can find different novels in many languages and for free by looking for them on Google, Documents, or Website. Another point to consider is that reading on the Internet[c] allows the reader to keep

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forever. It is

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worth mentioning that printed papers can tear and get lost.

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, sometimes it is not easy to carry printed material with you in some places, but through technology can read anywhere, like on the bus or

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, despite people having different views, I believe the[d] Internet has become prevalent globally. So it is a good selection to replace it with the traditional reading. Eventually, reading online can help individuals to save money.

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task response

Consider providing a balanced argument by discussing some potential drawbacks of reading online compared to printed material.

coherence cohesion

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coherence cohesion

Well-organized essay with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion structure, making it easy to follow.

task response

You provided relevant examples to support your main points, especially the availability of Shakespeare’s novels online.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

282 words

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printed books
newspapers
online reading
digital content
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environmental impact
traditional reading experience
ownership
personal connection
reliability
credibility
digital divide
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