The pie charts show the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009 and the reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009.

The pie charts show the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009 and the reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009.
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The two graphs provide information about several
causes
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of
immigration
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to and from a
country
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in
Europe
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since a specific period of time (2009) in six various categories: definite
job
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- look for
job
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- study- accompany\family- other reasons and no reason. The
causes
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for
immigration
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to a
country
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in
Europe
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are illustrated in the first
chart
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,
while
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the
causes
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for
immigration
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from a
country
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in
Europe
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are illustrated in the
second
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chart
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.
Overall
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, the
proportion
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of the
causes
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of
immigration
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to and from a
country
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in
Europe
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in 2009 is relatively variable. Turning to the first
chart
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we can observe that most
causes
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for
immigration
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to a
country
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in
Europe
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are accompany\family with exactly a quarter of the
proportion
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(25%),
whereas
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definite jobs are in
second
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place with (23%) of the
proportion
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.
According to
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the data,
look
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looking
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for
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job
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jobs
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and other reasons accounted for equal quantities with about (15%) of the
proportion
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.
In contrast
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, the situation is significantly disparate with
causes
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for
immigration
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from a
country
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in
Europe
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. By taking a closer look at the
second
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chart
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, we can observe that a definite
job
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is in first place at just above two-thirds of the
proportion
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(35%).
However
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, the looking for a
job
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is in
second
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place at approximately a quarter of the
proportion
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(23%).
It is clear that
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a definite
job
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,
look
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looking
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for
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job
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a job
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and accompany\family are the common
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causes
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cause
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sectors for
immigration
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from a
country
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in
Europe
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at almost three-quarters of the
proportion
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(73%).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words causes, immigration, country, europe, chart, second, proportion, job with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • migration trends
  • vibrant job market
  • foreign talent
  • educational pursuits
  • family reunification
  • seeking asylum
  • safe haven
  • dissatisfaction
  • specialized training
  • quality of life
  • economic factors
  • social factors
  • personal factors
  • push and pull factors
  • nuanced understanding
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