The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Kasiyet
The line graph illustrates the
number
of Use synonyms
shops
that started and stopped operating in a specific country between 2011 and 2018.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the data clearly shows that the numbers for both newly opened and closed Linking Words
shops
changed significantly over the given period. Use synonyms
At
the beginning, there were more Change the preposition
In
shops
opening than closing, but by the end of the period, the Use synonyms
number
of closures became higher.
In 2011, nearly 8,500 Use synonyms
shops
were opened, Use synonyms
while
fewer than 7,000 closed. Linking Words
However
, by 2012, the Linking Words
number
of new Use synonyms
shops
dropped sharply to 4,000. Use synonyms
After
Linking Words
this
decrease, the figure gradually increased, reaching 6,000 in 2014. Linking Words
This
Linking Words
number
remained constant for three years, after which it fell dramatically to 3,000 in 2018.
Regarding shop closures, the Use synonyms
number
dropped significantly to below 1,000 in 2015. Use synonyms
However
, it rose sharply the following year and remained steady at approximately 5,000 by 2018.Linking Words
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