You recently visited a foreign country and gost some information at the Tourist Information Centre. The information given to you was wrong. Write a letter to the centre manager and explain: - what was the information required - how was the wrong information provided? - what problem did you have because of this?

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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email to report a complaint regarding the data I received from the

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Information Centre, Delhi.

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month, I went to India for a four-week business trip to capture the most famous

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attractions of the country. For that, I contacted the

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Information Centre to provide me with a list, which I received within a day. Within a month, I covered the top ten places mentioned in the list.

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, when I returned to Canada and showed my project to my Indian friends, they were surprised that I did not document one of the seven wonders of the world, the Taj Mahal. Immediately, I verified the list and noticed that it was not there as well. I was hoping to complete the assignment by March 2025, but it would be a disappointment to not include the most popular place in India, probably the world.

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, I have to make one more journey to record the Taj Mahal, which will increase my

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project budget and delay it for two months. I hope you can correct the information in your

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guide. Yours faithfully, Raman Kumar

turanavdeepFri Jan 10 2025

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

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194 words

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