The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development
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The maps illustrate about the
centre
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of Islip
city
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City
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will develop in the future.
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, there are many changes and plans to add new facilities and roads. At present, the town
centre
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has two shops place in crossed from the main road behind
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the countryside. In the
centre
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, there are some houses and on the side of the house, there are
park
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. In the west of town, there are schools. In the future plans, There will be adding main roads to a dual carriageway from the school to the
park
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. The main road will be reconstructed to only be accessed by pedestrians. Look in detail the
centre
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of the city will be redevelopment from the shop to four new facilities.
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, in the corner of the west
centre
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there are new public facilities and is bus station. The shopping areas will be on the side of the bus station with a car
park
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for the shop visitors. In the corner of East in the
centre
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, there will be new houses. The
park
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will be cutting be small
park
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. Meanwhile, the shops opposite the shopping areas do not have redevelopment.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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