Nowadays, many people choose to work remotely from home instead of commuting to the office every day. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working from home?
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home
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sedentary
lifestyle, lack of guidance from higher authorities and increased workload.
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routine and eating healthy cooked food. Workers Correct article usage
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a crucial
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lack
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conclusion, working remotely has many advantages like spending time with family, cutting commuting charges and eating nutritious foods but it Change preposition
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the office
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