The graph below shows the availability of various sweeteners in the USA from 1966 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the availability of various sweeteners in the USA from 1966 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented line graph represents pounds of sweeteners produced between 1966 and 2012 in The United
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. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that they were a frictional increase in the total number of
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sweetener
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in the observed time.
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, each category had a different trend for 45 years. Turning the refine cane and beet sugars, there was a gradual decline
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the availability
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the market,
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producing
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100 pounds
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the beginning of the
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,
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in 1976, before remaining
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same level at
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around
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15 years earlier the previous sweetener
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,
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corn sugar increased dramatically and exceeded
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refined
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cane in 1981. After that,
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continuously
inclined and reached a peak at just
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across
80 before insignificantly declining from 2006 to 2011. Moving to the rest of the categories, both honey and edible syrup had a different trend compared to the previous sweeteners. The pound honey offered for society remained the same for the time
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frame.
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, the edible syrup had a constant trend at below 0,1
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lower than honey.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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