The graph below shows the availability of various sweeteners in the USA from 1966 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented line graph represents pounds of sweeteners produced between 1966 and 2012 in The United
Stated
. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that they were a frictional increase in the total number of Correct your spelling
States
the
Correct article usage
apply
sweetener
in the observed time. Fix the agreement mistake
sweeteners
In addition
, each category had a different trend for 45 years.
Turning the refine cane and beet sugars, there was a gradual decline Linking Words
of
the availability Change preposition
in
in
the market, Change preposition
of
by
producing Change preposition
apply
at
100 pounds Change preposition
apply
in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
years
, Fix the agreement mistake
year
then
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declined
in 1976, before remaining Wrong verb form
declining
the
same level at Change preposition
at the
arround
79. Correct your spelling
around
On the other hand
, Linking Words
while
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the
15 years earlier the previous sweetener Correct article usage
apply
declining
, Wrong verb form
declined
the
corn sugar increased dramatically and exceeded Correct article usage
apply
the
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that
refined
cane in 1981. After that, Change preposition
of refined
this
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continously
inclined and reached a peak at just Correct your spelling
continuously
acrros
80 before insignificantly declining from 2006 to 2011.
Moving to the rest of the categories, both honey and edible syrup had a different trend compared to the previous sweeteners. The pound honey offered for society remained the same for the time Correct your spelling
across
of
frame. Change preposition
apply
Likewise
, the edible syrup had a constant trend at below 0,1 Linking Words
pound
lower than honey.Fix the agreement mistake
pounds
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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