Face-to-face meetings with people are much more effective than meetings held on the telephone or via the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I think it depends on the person who may have his own preferences. I agree that online

meetings

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can lead to less

efficiency

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. I think

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due to

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a person’s laziness and greed to get even more free time. I can give some examples, you can sit in online math lessons and you will get bored and

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start doing nothing, nothing forces you to study,

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, you will not be forced to

work

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the presence of a teacher. The second example, in an online lesson, you can easily copy or force the

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to do all the

work

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, which can

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reduce

efficiency

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. I think we can say that laziness and less

efficiency

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are the only things that can lead to an online meeting. I can

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give the advantages of online

meetings

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, which I really appreciate.

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, you can drink tea or coffee or take food with you during an online meeting, you can watch chats and news at the same time,

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you can even leave without asking, but all

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can interfere with effective

work

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or study. I think online is a very comfortable type of meeting, but it is

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the reason for laziness and loss of

efficiency

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believe that online

meetings

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are a bad example of real

efficiency

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, as people stop working for real because they are at home during these

meetings

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. People should try to create real

meetings

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so that people develop socially and

work

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effectively.

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coherence cohesion

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You have acknowledged both advantages and disadvantages of online meetings, showing a balanced view.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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