An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere for your friend to stay give advice about what to do and see in your area give information about what clothes to bring

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Hi John, How are you ? I hope you are doing well. Recently, I got your letter asking about details

for

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your upcoming

14 days

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14-day

trip to India and I'm very happy to hear about

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, as you

are

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trying to plan it

since

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decades. First of all, for your

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accommodation

accomodation

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I would like to arrange a dulux room with a window facing towards

sea

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the sea

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, your stay will be near to my residence so that whenever I want to see you I can jump in at your place.

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, I

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to get bookings from the travel agency to give you

special

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tour

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informative

historic

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guidance

through out

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the city.

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is not only limited to

city

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tour

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, there will be activities like Scuba diving, Horse riding and eating some

fampus

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famous

street food. But make sure you

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eat much,

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you might get sick.

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taking

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about clothes just wear some loose shirts and shorts as there would be heat during the time you visit. I am very excited to see you here. Feel free to ask me if you need help in packing. Yours lovingly

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single idea per paragraph

Try to expand on each paragraph by providing detailed explanations. For instance, you could elaborate on why you chose the accommodation or why certain activities are recommended.

logical structure

Avoid abrupt shifts in topics. Ensure a smoother transition between discussing accommodation, tours, and clothing.

complete response

You have successfully covered all the points in the prompt: accommodation, things to do, and advice on clothing.

suitable writing tone

The tone is friendly and suitable for a letter to a friend, which makes the reader feel welcomed and comfortable.

greeting and closing

Your opening greeting and closing are well executed, providing a personal touch to the letter.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

6.5

Logical structure

6.5

Single idea per paragraph

7.5

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

191 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation
attractions
landmarks
cultural events
outdoor activities
regional cuisine
seasonal weather
suitable clothing
local recommendations
hospitality

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