The following two pie charts display the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.
The given pie charts depict the outcome of a study into the population of many free time activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.
Overall
, it is illustrated that people were not introduced to computer games in 1985, Linking Words
while
in 1995, it was played by 27% of the European adults.
Regarding watching TV, it can be observed from the chart that the ratio of people participating in Linking Words
this
activity remained approximately equal from 1985 till 1995, with 30%. In 1985, almost 41% of people liked to talk with family and eat out which had dropped by 26% in ten years.
Linking Words
Moreover
, around 21% of European Linking Words
men's
Change noun form
men
talk
with their Wrong verb form
talked
family
in the Fix the agreement mistake
families
year
1985. Use synonyms
However
, it has increased by 5% in ten years. There was no reading of playing computer games in the initial Linking Words
year
of the chart. Use synonyms
However
, it was 27% in the Linking Words
year
1995 which was the second highest number of that Use synonyms
year
.Use synonyms
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