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A friend of yours has a son/ daughter who recently graduated and is now applying for jobs. Your friend has asked you to give their son / daughter some advice about applying for a job. Write a letter to your friend’s son / daughter. In your letter give some advice about applying for a job explain why these things are important suggest a time and place you can meet to talk about this Write 150 words.

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Hi, Martin How are you? Well, congratulations on completing your studies. I had a call with John recently, and he told me about you—that you are looking for a job opportunity in the market right now. He asked me to share some advice with you that would help you in securing the ideal job you are looking for. As you are good at your academics, I would say do not grab the first offer you receive. It would be better if you keep applying for multiple jobs and later, based on company work ethics and market reputation, choose the right one. You should
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 consider employee strength. There is always a better opportunity if you start with a company having fewer employees, as it will give you a better learning curve and professional growth. We will discuss
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 if you are free on Sunday. Let's meet at Starbucks on 54 Groove Street at 6:00 P.M. We can discuss more on
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 topic. Warm Regards, Kevin White

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Consider providing specific advice on how to research company work ethics and market reputation.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that advice on job applications is organized into clear, distinct sections to improve coherence.
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The letter maintains a friendly and supportive tone throughout, which is appropriate for the context.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter includes a greeting, body, and closing, enabling easy understanding of the purpose and advice.
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The suggestion to meet provides a practical follow-up opportunity for further discussion.
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